Feedback from first group pitch

Here was our general feedback from our first group pitch for our main idea:

• water theme is nice but a lot of prep in studio before to only be used briefly  (water needs to be incorporated more)
• alice in wonderland theme is to cliche 
• water is good idea with the projections and the idea of the free flowing costume to make most of slow motion
• tee lights are to difficult to set up in woods 
• We need a third element so we do not run out of footage and we have lots to cut between
• clear about what she does underwater weather she is just lip syncing or dancing
• more euphoric idea underwater (enjoying it) rather then drowning so no panic is needed.
• specific woods? what happens in the woods?
• costume needs to be practical in woods as it is cold in novemeber but also free flowing enough for the water to make it realistic.